6.12.07

Snipe Hunt

Here's a draft of a new poem. I'll leave it up for comments and ideas for the next few days.


... it's gone now ...

2 comments:

Rob said...

Yes, entertainingly weird, humorous, and finally kind of sinister. I particularly enjoyed the line "...nor spots for the spotwelder."

Ben Wilkinson said...

Thanks Rob - glad you enjoyed it.